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ist auch diese Story wieder rundum gelungen. Bitte weiter so!
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7. November 2025 12:50
Ja, es mag in der Realität nicht von Langfristigkeit belohnt sein, wenn sich zwei Betrogene innerhalb von 24 sehr intensiv Nahe kommen.
Jedoch ist es eine Geschichte und der Plott sollte dazu dienen zum wichtigen Teil der Story hinzuführen. Ich weiß nicht, ob eine Extraschleife, die zugegebener Weise realistischer gewesen wäre, die Story nicht verwässert hätte.
Das geht nicht gegen den Autor und seine Kunst.
Ich bedanke mich für diese gute Unterhaltung und freue mich auf weitere gute Storys von ihm. Gerne auch fern ab der realen Welt.
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11. November 2025 17:03
Mir gefällt die Geschichte sehr gut ,alles dabei,weiter so ?
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