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Wer kennt das nicht, man sitzt mit Freunden irgendwo und betrachtet die vorbeigehenden Menschen und lästert über alles und jeden. Nichts Besonderes, was sich rentieren würde niederzuschreiben. Aber bei mir…

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Super

Hoffe ntlich kommt der 2. Teil bald
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 VOB
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Beigetreten: Vor 2 Jahren
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Das Lästermaul

Wer lästert nicht ab und freut sich wie ein Dieb darüber. Daher ein toller Beginn der Story. Die Story schreit förmlich nach weiteren Folgen und nicht nur einer.
LG aus dem tiefsten Niedersachsen
PS : Bitte nicht deine anderen Geschichten vergessen!



   
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Trusted Member Leser
Beigetreten: Vor 3 Jahren
Beiträge: 76
 

Potential

Sehr toller Anfang einer Geschichte mit viel Potential. Während die Geschichte des zweiten Teils ja durchaus schon absehbar ist, könnten vor allem danach noch viel geschehen, wenn Executor sich traut, seinen bisherigen Plot über den Haufen zu werfen und die Geschichte fortzuführen.



   
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Estimable Member Leser
Beigetreten: Vor 4 Jahren
Beiträge: 216
 

1

Danke für den schönen Beginn der Geschichte. Hast wieder Spannung aufgebaut und Neugier für die Fortsetzung geweckt.
Viele Grüße aus Brandenburg
PETER



   
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(@eisbaer)
Eminent Member Leser
Beigetreten: Vor 3 Jahren
Beiträge: 38
 

Mir hat der erste Teil sehr gut gefallen. Ich bin gespannt auf dem zweiten und ich hätte auch nichts dagegen, wenn es einen Dritten oder noch mehr Teile geben würde, wenn der zweite Teil so gut wie der erste ist.



   
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Beigetreten: Vor 3 Jahren
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Hallo Eisbaer,
der 2. Teil wurde bereits 2 Tage nach dem 1. Teil veröffentlicht. Ob es weitere Teile davon gibt, kann ich zum derzeitigem Zeitpunkt nicht sagen. Aber ich bedanke mich für das Interesse.



   
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Estimable Member Leser
Beigetreten: Vor 4 Jahren
Beiträge: 116
 

Toll

Es hat viel Spaß gemacht die Geschichte zu lesen!!!
Gruß Rolf



   
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