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"Das Leben kann schön sein ..."

...und so, wie du es beschreibst, ist es schön. Eine ungewöhnliche Geschichte, sehr gut beschrieben und in einem leicht zu lesenden Stil geschrieben. Hat mir sehr gefallen - mach bitte weiter so!

EberHeu



   
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Gelungen....

Vielen Dank für die schöne Story. Gut geschrieben. Ich freue mich auf weiter Geschichten und dir!



   
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schöne Geschichte

mit eigentlich erwarteten Wendung (also zumindest mir kam das schon so vor) daß Keks seine Schwester ist - und dann doch wieder nicht ! - zum Glück der Beiden.
sehr gut geschrieben, schön zu lesen.



   
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Schöne Geschichte

Alles wirkt, trotz der komplizierten Verhältnisse, leicht und locker - ob man das so handhaben kann???
Hier scheint das Glück für vier in nächster Nähe und keiner ahnt die Implikationen.
Trotz aller Eventualitäten - schöne Geschichte mit allem Drum und Dran!

Gruss Jochen



   
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Hat Spaß gemacht.

Schön geschrieben, interessante Wendungen hin und her. Gerne noch mehr solche Geschichten



   
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Echt schöne Geschichte...

War schön flüssig zu lesen.... Wie das Leben so spielt, verzwickt und turbolent... Danke



   
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Wie das Leben spielt

Ja manches Mal hat das Leben so seine Irrungen und Wirrungen. Schön und spannend erzählte Geschichte



   
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Tolle Geschichte

schön zu lesen und ich habe mich doch tatsächlich reinversetzen können. Mein Kompliment an den Autor - Wahnsinn!! Gerne mehr



   
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