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28. November 2022 0:16  

Arzt und Nonne

Jessi,
eine Klasse Geschichte, die Du wieder geschafft hast. Es hat riesige Freude gemacht, sie zu lesen.
Mach ganz einfach weiter so.
Viele liebe Grüße
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28. November 2022 10:28  

Schön

Eine schöne Geschichte mit viel Romantik und einem happy end.

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28. November 2022 12:29  

Der Arzt und die Nonne

Sehr schöne Geschichte, ich kannte sie schon von einem anderen Portal. So langsam sind alle guten Autoren mit ihren tollen Geschichten hier zu finden, so dass ich nicht mehr viel suchen muss. Weiter so!!!
Mit freundlichen Grüßen
Hudi



   
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29. November 2022 20:04  

Vielen Dank

Dies ist eine sehr hübsche Story, es machte Spass sie zu lesen. Es darf gern mehr davon geben.



   
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Themenstarter 29. November 2022 20:37  

"Der Arzt und die Nonne"

Vielen Dank an alle, für ihr liebes Feedback



   
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1. Dezember 2022 12:06  

Mit Fehlern.

Der dirty talk schlägt dann doch auf den Autor durch. Mal erste Person Ich dann doch 3. Person Jens. Wenn sie als Ärztin arbeitet (S 15), sollte sie auch Ahnung von männlicher Anatomie und Physiologie haben. Auch Nonnen müssen beim Medizinstudium durch das AIP.



   
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1. Dezember 2022 15:34  

Der Arzt und die Nonne

Habe ich schon auf einen anderen Portal gelesen. Bitte nicht soviele
Wechsel 1.Person und dritte. Sonst nicht schlecht geschrieben. Kann mir weitere vorstellen.
Danke



   
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12. Dezember 2022 21:34  

Schöne Geschichte

Hallo Jessi,
bitte die nächste Geschichte vorab Querlesen lassen. Die Fehler waren zwar leicht, störten aber und rissen mich aus der Geschichte.
Für die Idee volle Punktzahl. Die handwerklichen Kleinigkeiten führten zu einem leichten Punktabzug.
Bitte weiterschreiben.
LG Tiw1



   
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3. Januar 2024 10:41  

Arzt und Nonne

Hallo Jessi,

lass Dich von den ständigen Nörglern ja nicht das schreiben vermiesen, mir gefällt die Geschichte sehr gut. Du hast einen sehr schönen Schreistiel und deshalb bitte mehr davon.
Liebe Grüße Maik



   
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10. Oktober 2025 6:33  

"Der Arzt und die Nonne"

Hallo Jessi, viele lieben Dank für diese wunderbare Geschichte! Sie hätte sicherlich Potential zu noch mehr Kapiteln gehabt aber auch so hast du mich mit deiner Art zu Schreiben erfreut und hast ein schönes Ende gefunden.

Viele Dank und Grüße
McSchleck



   
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