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Themenstarter 4. Mai 2026 9:11  

Der süße Fratz (Elisa) I. Heruntergekommen und einsam liegt er da, der kleine Spielplatz am Rande der Wohnsiedlung, in der vorwiegend ältere Menschen wohnen. Zumindest haben die Kinder von früher…

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11. Mai 2022 17:24  

Wunderschöne Geschichte

Beyond the door
There's peace, I'm sure
And I know there'll be no more
Tears in heaven

Ja, und Gott gibt es wirklich!



   
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Themenstarter 12. Mai 2022 13:01  

Eine schöne, gefühlvolle Geschichte,

deren Ende nur im ersten Augenblick verwirrt, da es viele Leser dieses Portals möglicherweise nicht gewohnt sind. Doch die Geschichten müssen nicht immer ohne alle Lebensschicksale enden. Hier eben mit schicksalhaftem Beginn und Ende. Für mich kein Grund für einen Punktabzug.



   
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24. Mai 2022 8:16  

Grüße aus Franken

Hi. Das war eine sehr gut gelungene Geschichte. Stimmt das Ende ist ungewöhnlich aber so ist das öeben



   
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24. Mai 2022 8:18  

Grüße aus Franken

Hi. Das war eine sehr gut gelungene Geschichte. Stimmt das Ende ist etwas anders aber so ist das Leben, meistens kommt es anders als man denkt. Schreib weiter so freue mich auf die nächste.
Gruß Manfred



   
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31. Mai 2022 18:14  

Gefällt mir

Gute Geschichte, schlüssige Handlung, mutiges Ende.
Alles richtig gemacht



   
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15. Mai 2023 2:37  

Tolle rührende Geschichte

Tolle rührselige Geschichte mit viel Gefühl geschrieben. Sie hat mich berührt.



   
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29. Januar 2024 14:15  

Eine Geschichte die das Herz rührt

Diese Geschichte ist sehr gut geschrieben und auch der Schluss ist für mich voll nachvollziehbar. Das Leben meint es nicht immer gut mit Liebenden Sondern es werden halt auch immer wieder einem Knüppel in die Beine geworfen.
Alles in einem Super Geschichte. Gern mehr auch davon.



   
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26. Februar 2024 23:19  

Danke

Habe diese Geschichte von der ersten bis zur letzten Zeile genossen, wurde doch gezeigt wie das Leben so spielen kann. In diesem Sinne passt auch das Ende, denn bei allem schönen, das man genießen kann muss man immer damit rechnen, dass auf einen Schlag Schluss sein kann. Daher passt dieses Ende auch zum Verlauf der Geschichte. Freue mich auf weitere Geschichten



   
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19. August 2025 22:49  

Eliza oder besser Kim

Eine wunderschöne Liebesgeschichte mit einem sehr traurigen Ende.
Es hat mir bis zum Epilog sehr viel Spaß gemacht sie zu lesen und dann kam es wie ein Hammerschlag, hart und unfair und doch leider möglich.

Danke, dass du uns Leser nicht nur "Eitel Sonnenschein" gibst.

Beste Grüße
McSchleck



   
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10. Februar 2026 18:52  

Danke

Danke für die rührende Geschichte.
Und wenn ich meine Meinung sagen darf: Einen Gott gibt es nicht und wenn doch ist es ein versoffenes Arschloch

Mit freundlichen Grüßen Joachim Back



   
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