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Wie angekündigt, folgen jetzt die Teile 2 und 3. Ich bitte Wiederholungen zu entschuldigen, aber bei meiner einfachen Denkweise habe ich es nicht anders hinbekommen. Ich bin wirklich gespannt, welche…
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1. April 2024 18:41
Teil 2 oder 3 ???
Teil 1 ist konsequent...
Tei 2 und 3 haben gute Seiten, aber gefallen mir nur teilweise in der Ausführung.
Ein Vertrauensbruch liegt immer vor und ist bei den Parteien im Hinterkopf gespeichert (eigene Erfahrung).....
AntwortZitat
1. April 2024 18:49
Entscheidung 2 oder 3;
eine schöne Geschichte.
Teil 2 gefällt mir hier besser.
Danke für deine Veröffentlichung.
gbblond
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1. April 2024 20:18
Ent(Scheidung) Teil 2
Bitte Fortsetzung Teil 2
AntwortZitat
1. April 2024 21:25
Entscheidung!
Die erste Version ist die harte Realität und die zweite die romantische, die selten wahr wird.
Ich wähle die zweite, wir zurzeit viel zu viel mit der Realität konfrontiert werden.
Mache ruhig weiter mit Geschichten schreiben.
reblu
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2. April 2024 1:39
2 oder 3
Moin moin,
vielen lieben Dank für Deine Geschichte - Teil 2 war authentischer, aber als Romantiker wünsche ich mir Teil 3.. 🙂
Bin auf die Fortsetzung gespannt
Viele Grüße
Martin
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2. April 2024 18:58
Mal was Neues
Teil 3 fand ich irgendwie origineller.
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3. April 2024 11:25
Als Romantikerin Teil 3
Aber etwas mehr Ausgeschmückt, so fällt vom Schreibstiel her Teil 3 merklich von Teil 1 ab.
LG
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4. April 2024 0:40
Bitte Teil 2…
Das liest sich für mich vom Verlauf eindeutig authentischer…
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4. April 2024 1:58
Teil2
Ganz klar Teil2
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21. Juli 2024 16:44
2-3
mir gefällt Teil 2 besser........
AntwortZitat
9. August 2025 7:38
2 oder 3 keine einfache Entscheidung
Teil 2 ist ausführlicher Dargestellt und aus Sicht des Betrogenen die wohl schönere und hoffnugsvollere Ende
Teil 3 ist ein wenig brutaler aber zeigt die Größe des Charakters des Betrogenen, er ist in der Lage einen schweren Fehler zu verzeihen. Daher wähle ich den harten Weg, also Teil 3
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