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Themenstarter 22. März 2024 16:04  

Donald nannten mich meine Eltern, ich konnte mir nur vorstellen, dass sie enthusiastische Comic-Leser waren und daher von Donald Duck begeistert waren. Leider haben sie mir auch keinen zweiten Vornamen…

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 oldman65xxl
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22. März 2024 17:40  

Bitte eine Fortsetzung

Habe die Geschuchte in einem Rutsch gelesen.
Hoffe auf eine oder mehrere Fortsetzungen.



   
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 Hudi
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22. März 2024 18:17  

Ja, bitte eine Fortsetzung

Zügig gelesen, Geschichte sehr gut, Fortsetzung erwünscht.
Grüße
Hudi



   
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 Leser68
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22. März 2024 19:02  

Auch ich bin für eine Fortsetzung

Die Geschichte hätte es verdient.



   
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 Rheinländer
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22. März 2024 19:15  

Und das

ist nicht nur gut, sondern auch richtig so. Da geht aber sicher noch mehr als nur was.
Der Rheinländer



   
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 Heiko007
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22. März 2024 19:15  

Man sollte mit dem Hirn denken und nicht .....

Auch ich bin für eine Fortsetzung denn die Geschichte hat mir sehr gefallen.



   
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 Gummibaer57
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22. März 2024 19:44  

Bitte um Fortsetzung

Mir hat die Story sehr gut gefallen. Eine Fortsetzung wäre sehr schön. Bitte mehr davon.



   
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 obelix54
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22. März 2024 21:03  

hallo

Das schreit direkt nach einer fortsetzung.

Gruss Martin



   
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 Noddy Hensley
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22. März 2024 21:09  

Schöne Geschichte

Sehr schöne Geschichte, bitte weiter so



   
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 Leseratte56
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22. März 2024 22:33  

Tolle Geschichte

Rasantes Tempo, schöner Schreibstiel, schreit nach weiteren Folgen.

Aber eine Kritik habe ich dann doch: Das Neunte Wort im vorletzten Satz ist sowas von absolut überflüssig. Ich betrachte es einfach als nur versehentlich geschrieben. Dann macht die Geschichte noch viel mehr Spaß.



   
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 jason59
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22. März 2024 23:08  

Sehr erotischer Anfang!

Schön geschrieben - sehr anschaulich und anregend, ohne gleich ins pornographische abzugleiten. In dieser Konstellation kann das ein sehr gute Episoden- Serie werden. Ich erwarte die Fortsetzung im Wellness-Hotel mit Spannung!
Gruss Jochen



   
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 Gatekeeper
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22. März 2024 23:15  

ja

eine fortsetzung muß schon sein. Aber eine Bitte hab ich dann auch noch. Bitte schreibe endlich mal ne kurzform der story um die es geht, damit man nicht immer die ersten Sätze liest wenn man das Bild anklickt...



   
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 pit755
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23. März 2024 2:15  

Man

Danke für die schöne Geschichte. Einfach klasse zu lesen. Ich glaube die Frage nach einer Fortsetzung hat sich nach den Kommentaren schon erledigt, wir warten darauf.
Viele liebe Grüße und ein schönes Wochenende
Peter



   
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 renni165
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23. März 2024 2:36  

Klasse...

Klasse geschrieben...



   
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 Harald54
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23. März 2024 2:58  

Eine in weiten Teilen vorhersehbare Entwicklung,

aber schön erzählt und ohne Stolpersteine zum Abschluss gebracht.



   
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